Appeals to audience
- has a clearer narrative between the girl and singer using technology
- added ore smoke bombs to create interesting layering over the singer
- less editing effects from Final Cut
This is my Final Rough Cut, I have added in recent footage that has been added to my music video, especially the clips of the phones and the smoke bombs and the skateboard clip. I have felt that my music video is ready to become a final cut but I will try and get more audience feedback in case there is still more improvements I can make.